my website

XLVenom · 23-10-10, 05:14 PM

So this is my website, it looks pretty dull & crappy so far. I need ideas and feedback on what I sould change on it and how to make it better, I have had NOT ONE green in three months and im getting antsy, but yeah all criticism is welcome, thanks in advance.

heres the link http://myfreebiejeebies.webs.com/

decfootylad · 23-10-10, 05:20 PM

cool site, less text on one page, (spread it ut over a few)

Moneymaker1 · 23-10-10, 05:23 PM

You need a link back to Exceem if your going to put it on your sig. Also if you want people to give your site critique you need to become an extra member.

XLVenom · 23-10-10, 05:28 PM

@decfootylad youre right, thanks!

@Moneymaker1 do you mean a link to my page, or exceem in general?

and how do you become an extra member?

Moneymaker1 · 23-10-10, 05:30 PM

On your website you must have a clickable link to exceem. An extra member is a paid subscription.

XLVenom · 23-10-10, 05:34 PM

oh ok, thanks!

Andyb123 · 23-10-10, 05:43 PM

I'd also remove that video on there... and quickly.

az87aris · 23-10-10, 05:51 PM

You've copy and pasted all of the text from ndev2k's goodies4free website and tried to pass it off as your own work.

I'd remove the copied content pretty quickly..

XLVenom · 26-10-10, 02:00 AM

I realize that. its a "rough draft" until i get my own graphics, until then its a substitute that im using reluctantly.

az87aris · 26-10-10, 07:28 AM

That doesn't make it right though. You can't walk out of a shop with something until you are able to pay for it, theft is theft..

XLVenom · 01-11-10, 03:56 PM

ok yeah, i realize that. at the end of the day, it is what it is. a website

Madex · 01-11-10, 04:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by XLVenom

ok yeah, i realize that. at the end of the day, it is what it is. a website with stolent content. but don't worry guys, i'll get working right away and write my own text. cheerios!

fix'd

XLVenom · 13-11-10, 02:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Madex

fix'd

lol well played madex

sam01794 · 13-11-10, 03:34 PM

Rename "page 2" to something more appropriate.

23-10-10, 05:14 PM	#1
XLVenom iPod Shuffle Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: USA Posts: 17	my website So this is my website, it looks pretty dull & crappy so far. I need ideas and feedback on what I sould change on it and how to make it better, I have had NOT ONE green in three months and im getting antsy, but yeah all criticism is welcome, thanks in advance. heres the link http://myfreebiejeebies.webs.com/ Last edited by XLVenom; 23-10-10 at 05:17 PM..

23-10-10, 05:51 PM	#8
az87aris Mini Mac Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: South Yorkshire Posts: 4,906	You've copy and pasted all of the text from ndev2k's goodies4free website and tried to pass it off as your own work. I'd remove the copied content pretty quickly.. __________________ Free iPhone 4S \| Free iPad \| Free iPod

26-10-10, 07:28 AM	#10
az87aris Mini Mac Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: South Yorkshire Posts: 4,906	That doesn't make it right though. You can't walk out of a shop with something until you are able to pay for it, theft is theft.. __________________ Free iPhone 4S \| Free iPad \| Free iPod

01-11-10, 03:56 PM	#11
XLVenom iPod Shuffle Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: USA Posts: 17	ok yeah, i realize that. at the end of the day, it is what it is. a website Last edited by XLVenom; 01-11-10 at 04:00 PM..

23-10-10, 05:20 PM	#2
decfootylad iPod Shuffle Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Live In Blandford Posts: 12	cool site, less text on one page, (spread it ut over a few)

23-10-10, 05:23 PM	#3
Moneymaker1 iPod 20gb Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 430	You need a link back to Exceem if your going to put it on your sig. Also if you want people to give your site critique you need to become an extra member.

23-10-10, 05:28 PM	#4
XLVenom iPod Shuffle Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: USA Posts: 17	@decfootylad youre right, thanks! @Moneymaker1 do you mean a link to my page, or exceem in general? and how do you become an extra member?

23-10-10, 05:30 PM	#5
Moneymaker1 iPod 20gb Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 430	On your website you must have a clickable link to exceem. An extra member is a paid subscription.

23-10-10, 05:34 PM	#6
XLVenom iPod Shuffle Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: USA Posts: 17	oh ok, thanks!

23-10-10, 05:43 PM	#7
Andyb123 iPod 20gb Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 742	I'd also remove that video on there... and quickly.

26-10-10, 02:00 AM	#9
XLVenom iPod Shuffle Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: USA Posts: 17	I realize that. its a "rough draft" until i get my own graphics, until then its a substitute that im using reluctantly.

13-11-10, 03:34 PM	#14
sam01794 iPod Nano 4GB Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 299	Rename "page 2" to something more appropriate.