Northern-Monkey.info

nmcg dan · 16-02-10, 12:19 PM

Just set this up very quickly, was wondering if anyone had any input to improve this page?

Many thanks

messyhead · 16-02-10, 01:18 PM

Not sure about the monkey graphic - it looks like a 3 year old drew it.

It's also a bit text heavy. Whilst it's good to explain the process, people tend to scan web pages rather than read them in depth, so it might be better to break up the text into the main points using headings etc.

nmcg dan · 16-02-10, 02:37 PM

Thanks for the input. I'll reduce the text and place more informative graphics. I'll check out the link in your signature

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16-02-10, 12:19 PM	#1
nmcg dan iPod Nano 2GB Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Hull Posts: 151	Northern-Monkey.info Just set this up very quickly, was wondering if anyone had any input to improve this page? Many thanks Link ::

16-02-10, 01:18 PM	#2
messyhead iBook Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Glasgow Posts: 2,266	Not sure about the monkey graphic - it looks like a 3 year old drew it. It's also a bit text heavy. Whilst it's good to explain the process, people tend to scan web pages rather than read them in depth, so it might be better to break up the text into the main points using headings etc.

16-02-10, 02:37 PM	#3
nmcg dan iPod Nano 2GB Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Hull Posts: 151	Thanks for the input. I'll reduce the text and place more informative graphics. I'll check out the link in your signature .