First Website Attempt

chapperzUK · 16-11-09, 09:15 PM

24/7 GIVEAWAY - FREE iPhones, iPods, Wii, PS3

Any comments would be much appreciated. Thanks

beezer123 · 16-11-09, 09:16 PM

It's under review at the moment from 000webhost.
Should be back up in under 48 hours.

chapperzUK · 16-11-09, 09:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by beezer123

It's under review at the moment from 000webhost.
Should be back up in under 48 hours.

ah ok, I didn't know that. Thanks

butterboy25 · 16-11-09, 11:55 PM

It looks fairly good to me for a first attempt. I'd be adding more and more information over time to explain how it works to entice people to give it a try.

MegamanEXE · 17-11-09, 08:30 AM

Not bad at all.

chapperzUK · 18-11-09, 05:41 PM

Thanks for the feedback. I have added to the FAQ section and the custom page since.

beezer123 · 18-11-09, 05:48 PM

That's a fairly old template that I saw kicking about a few years back.

Not bad for a first attempt though but i would suggest updating the images on the homepage a bit as you are still showing the original iPod shuffle

chapperzUK · 18-11-09, 05:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by beezer123

That's a fairly old template that I saw kicking about a few years back.

Not bad for a first attempt though but i would suggest updating the images on the homepage a bit as you are still showing the original iPod shuffle

Opps. Didn't spot that .... can't see how I missed it! *d'oh*

williamblah · 18-11-09, 06:18 PM

On your contacts page the contact form runs over the page border.

Also (and this is me being really really really picky), on your proofs page, BBC Newsnight might sound better than BBC program Newsnight, if for nothing else than to make me feel better...

That's all though!!

Amiethest · 18-11-09, 06:26 PM

Nice template though. Very pretty.

chapperzUK · 19-11-09, 05:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by williamblah

On your contacts page the contact form runs over the page border.

Also (and this is me being really really really picky), on your proofs page, BBC Newsnight might sound better than BBC program Newsnight, if for nothing else than to make me feel better...

That's all though!!

Thanks. What browser are you using?

williamblah · 19-11-09, 06:43 PM

I'm using firefox, if that helps!

chapperzUK · 19-11-09, 07:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by williamblah

I'm using firefox, if that helps!

Yes it does. Work on chrome (the one I am using) but I get an error message when I go onto it, does anyone else get this?

williamblah · 20-11-09, 12:20 AM

I don't get any error message. What does the error message say?

elliotknell · 20-11-09, 01:56 AM

Could someone please tell me why this thread, and all the other "Review My Site" threads are still in this section, while mine seems to be the only one that was moved?

williamblah · 20-11-09, 02:03 AM

Maybe because we are no longer reviewing your site content wise but discussing errors etc?

elliotknell · 20-11-09, 02:07 AM

It must be, but I really was going for content commenting too. I just can't see how my site was the only one that violated the rule.

williamblah · 20-11-09, 02:21 AM

If a mod moved it they will have had their reasons! I doesn't really make a huge amount of difference anyway really...

elliotknell · 20-11-09, 02:31 AM

The mod's descision doesn't bother me, i readily accept it, but what bothers me is that it only applied to my thread, when there are dozens others like it.

And yes, it does make a difference since i cant view my thread in the new section that it was moved to.

16-11-09, 09:15 PM	#1
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18-11-09, 05:48 PM	#7
beezer123 Mini Mac Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Aberdeenshire Posts: 4,038	That's a fairly old template that I saw kicking about a few years back. Not bad for a first attempt though but i would suggest updating the images on the homepage a bit as you are still showing the original iPod shuffle __________________ My Sites Free Nintendo DSi Free Macbook Pro Free Galaxy Nexus Free iPhone 4S Free iPad 2 open spoiler to see what im doing Spoiler currently working on: Verifying: Ordered: Received: Macbook 13 inch from Apple incentives £570 Amazon Voucher instead of second MacBook from Apple.real incentices Netgear DG834N Router from Apple.freebiejeebies £26 Rollersnakes voucher from Apple.freebiejeebies iPod Touch 8Gb from Apple.Freebiejeebies iPod Nano 8gb from Apple.Freebiejeebies £150 Amazon Voucher from gifts.real-incentives £180 amazon voucher from Nextgen.giveaway. 2 x Apple iPhone from Apple incentives COD World at war from Apple Incentives Silver Apple iPod Nano 4gb from Apple incentives Nintendo Ds lite White from forfree4u Noise Magnets x2 forfree4u

18-11-09, 06:18 PM	#9
williamblah iPod 60gb Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Colchester, Essex Posts: 1,898	On your contacts page the contact form runs over the page border. Also (and this is me being really really really picky), on your proofs page, BBC Newsnight might sound better than BBC program Newsnight, if for nothing else than to make me feel better... That's all though!! __________________ >> GET 2 FREE GREENS << with the FJ Sports ~~ CONGA! ~~

16-11-09, 11:55 PM	#4
butterboy25 iPod Shuffle Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Backwods of West Virginia Posts: 12	It looks fairly good to me for a first attempt. I'd be adding more and more information over time to explain how it works to entice people to give it a try.

18-11-09, 05:41 PM	#6
chapperzUK Mini Mac Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Southend, Essex Posts: 3,056	Thanks for the feedback. I have added to the FAQ section and the custom page since.

18-11-09, 06:26 PM	#10
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20-11-09, 01:56 AM	#15
elliotknell iPod 20gb Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: U.S. Posts: 673	Could someone please tell me why this thread, and all the other "Review My Site" threads are still in this section, while mine seems to be the only one that was moved?

20-11-09, 02:03 AM	#16
williamblah iPod 60gb Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Colchester, Essex Posts: 1,898	Maybe because we are no longer reviewing your site content wise but discussing errors etc? __________________ >> GET 2 FREE GREENS << with the FJ Sports ~~ CONGA! ~~

20-11-09, 02:07 AM	#17
elliotknell iPod 20gb Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: U.S. Posts: 673	It must be, but I really was going for content commenting too. I just can't see how my site was the only one that violated the rule.

20-11-09, 02:21 AM	#18
williamblah iPod 60gb Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Colchester, Essex Posts: 1,898	If a mod moved it they will have had their reasons! I doesn't really make a huge amount of difference anyway really... __________________ >> GET 2 FREE GREENS << with the FJ Sports ~~ CONGA! ~~

20-11-09, 02:31 AM	#19
elliotknell iPod 20gb Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: U.S. Posts: 673	The mod's descision doesn't bother me, i readily accept it, but what bothers me is that it only applied to my thread, when there are dozens others like it. And yes, it does make a difference since i cant view my thread in the new section that it was moved to.