04-07-09, 11:30 PM
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 | How is my website? (new to this)I just sortof finished a website on a free hosting thing, and i need some feedback on it , i.e: will it it ever do any good? here is the adress: Free Macbook Laptops - Home All thoughts welcome!  |
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04-07-09, 11:46 PM
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 | quite good but you havn't added any proof and you need a link back to eXceem ... i advice you to add some tips and some pictures that will be great
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04-07-09, 11:47 PM
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| Ok thanks i will, i was just about to put on eXeem's link |
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05-07-09, 10:27 AM
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| you can put your link in your signature ... And there is a lot of proof ... see what you can find at MegaFreebie Proof Gallery put some of them in you home page  that will convince visitors
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05-07-09, 09:44 PM
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| Ok, i have just updated the site with a contact me page, a proof page, and a how it works page. I put the exceem link under "PRoof". Any ideas or feedback? Anybody? |
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09-07-09, 04:27 PM
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| Come On!This is sad. WIll no one tell me what they think about my website? Is it that bad? Are you just hiding the aweful truth from me to give me a false sense of accomplishment? Somebody! 
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09-07-09, 05:09 PM
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 | right this is an honest opinion of mine, it looks crap. writting is too big the design is too dark, the adverts need to go. you need a nice bright clean page with photos, and no more than size 14 text << headers norm text 12 min 10 the problem u have is its free hosting and you will not rank anywhere with it as its not going to be stable. all the high pullers of greens have static paid hosting apart from those with methods of course. look at other peoples websites and get the feel for them and how they are laid out you will start to see a pattern, as most are the same content just laid out in a personal designed way. if this comes across as slating your site i wasnt intending to but those saying its good etc are doing you no good even from their best intentions.
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09-07-09, 06:00 PM
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| Second harvez. But don't give up, just work on it!
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09-07-09, 06:32 PM
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| I third Harvez, it does look crap. Dont give up, i have redone my website about 7 times in 2 years and im about to change it again. I too went for the dark background but after looking at others i have noticed that the big earners have nice bright and clear sites. Maybe this isnt the reason i am struggling but im going to change it and find out. In other words keep changing until you have got a site that YOU feel will do the biz. I would also change to a paid host, learn about SEO and build those backlinks! Good luck. |
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09-07-09, 06:52 PM
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 | can someone take alook at my site please. I seem to be getting disjointed text when i view it on my laptop yet it looks fine on my pc. its Free PS3, Free Apple Ipod, Free PSP, Nintendo DS, Free XBox 360, or just good hard cash ! cheers guys |
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09-07-09, 08:29 PM
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One thing though, that Alexa thing at the top. Get rid of it at least from where it is. If you must have crap like that on your page then stick it at the bottom with all the rest of the drizzle that you don't need (No offence intended, it just looks cheap) Oh, and you should really open your own topic for things like this as well so the OP or yourself don't get lost with peoples replies.
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09-07-09, 08:35 PM
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| To the OP. I also agree with harvez. It looks like it's been built with one of these point and click site builders and no matter what you do to it's current format, it's always going to look like that. mikejoy1969 : See how this is going to get confusing
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