right finshet my website now...

[shahzadh]

iv finshet my website iv added picture like the before tread i started now i know iv made some mistaks but could some tell me how i got improve it and tell me if i have made any errors here is the link Totally FREE Gifts - How To Get Free PS3 Free iPod Touch Free XBOX 360 Free Wii Free HDTV and Free Laptop And AnyThing Els

[the joker]

you have updated your website T_T

[shahzadh]

Originally Posted by the joker

you have updated your website T_T

the what

[the joker]

it's not the first time that i have visited your website ... you have added new content and that looks great

Nice work

[IrishiPhone]

Bit sore on the eyes.

Nav bar is a bit blurred as the colours are all dark
Use white for the links in the nav bar and it'll stand out much more than the black.

The Link Bucks pop ups would make me leave straight away.
Pop ups usually happen on scam and spam sites mst of the time so gt rid of them.

Why is there a donate button at the bottom of the page.
What are people donating to ?

The text needs to be laid out a bit better
The image is good on the front page
also the gifts available is great

[shahzadh]

Originally Posted by IrishiPhone

Bit sore on the eyes.

Nav bar is a bit blurred as the colours are all dark
Use white for the links in the nav bar and it'll stand out much more than the black.

The Link Bucks pop ups would make me leave straight away.
Pop ups usually happen on scam and spam sites mst of the time so gt rid of them.

Why is there a donate button at the bottom of the page.
What are people donating to ?

The text needs to be laid out a bit better
The image is good on the front page
also the gifts available is great

thanks for that is the nav bar the one which has gifts avalibel faqs contact me etc. part at the top and how do i make the text laid out better also you said its a bit sore on your eyes how could i improve that

[SgtM]

The site looks good. Nice layout, top graphic has a nice feel. Here's my take:

Problem - Text That Looks Like This, OR LIKE THIS. In my opinion, it's much better to use standard capitalization. If you want to draw someone's attention, use a contrasting color to your theme (red works in your case), and bold or underline it.

Spelling and grammar need some work as well. That said, I don't know where you are in the world, English may not be your native language.

Speaking of languages, I would consider putting the google translator somewhere near the top of the page. It feels like it's lost down there at the bottom.

I think the donate and hit counter would look much better in the center next to each other.

Consider losing the blue border on your graphics, and center the text below them (especially on the gifts page).

I really like the gifts available page. I hope you don't mind if I borrow that idea.

On the "proof it works page", consider embedding a youtube video or two. Use the Newsnight and/or CNN video where they reported the system is valid, and not a scam.

You're well on your way to having a great website. Work on those areas, and you'll be set!

[Amiethest]

Text is a little large for me, but the proof pici is good.

[shahzadh]

Originally Posted by SgtM

The site looks good. Nice layout, top graphic has a nice feel. Here's my take:

Problem - Text That Looks Like This, OR LIKE THIS. In my opinion, it's much better to use standard capitalization. If you want to draw someone's attention, use a contrasting color to your theme (red works in your case), and bold or underline it.

Spelling and grammar need some work as well. That said, I don't know where you are in the world, English may not be your native language.

Speaking of languages, I would consider putting the google translator somewhere near the top of the page. It feels like it's lost down there at the bottom.

I think the donate and hit counter would look much better in the center next to each other.

Consider losing the blue border on your graphics, and center the text below them (especially on the gifts page).

I really like the gifts available page. I hope you don't mind if I borrow that idea.

On the "proof it works page", consider embedding a youtube video or two. Use the Newsnight and/or CNN video where they reported the system is valid, and not a scam.

You're well on your way to having a great website. Work on those areas, and you'll be set!

ahh thanks for that i dont mind if you put the gifts avalibal idear on your website

[mattyb]

I agree with the capitalisation issue on all your words, I would remove that as it doesn't inspire confidence in my eyes.

I think the borders on the images should be taken off too.

But beyond a shadow of a doubt the most important thing I think you should change is the pop up appearing on every nav item! It would make me leave immediately.

[the joker]

mattyb Are you working as a web designer because every time i visit your website .

it's just amazing O_O

[shahzadh]

Originally Posted by mattyb

I agree with the capitalisation issue on all your words, I would remove that as it doesn't inspire confidence in my eyes.

I think the borders on the images should be taken off too.

But beyond a shadow of a doubt the most important thing I think you should change is the pop up appearing on every nav item! It would make me leave immediately.

im not sure how to take the border of the images off

[edasvangen]

Originally Posted by shahzadh

im not sure how to take the border of the images off

Take a look at the other thread you started.

[edasvangen]

NOTE: Do Not Sign up More Then Once And Sign Up In a Public Place Because it is Likely Some Else Has Signed up

This needs some changing, as it is now you're basicly telling them to sign up at a public place. Change it to: "Do not sign up more than one time, and avoid doing any offers in public places such as internet cafes because the offers freebiejeebies link to dont like getting several signups from the same IP adress."

Or something like that. Also Dont Go Capital On All The Words Like I Did Now, It's Ugly . Punctuations(!.,) between sentences also needed.

You have to this

You have to do this

And as most people type wrong, it's THAN, not then for sentences like "do not sign up more than" and "then" for sentences like "blabla then you go and do a survey"...

Gotta go to the train station to pick up my sister now so cant do more.

[shahzadh]

Originally Posted by edasvangen

This needs some changing, as it is now you're basicly telling them to sign up at a public place. Change it to: "Do not sign up more than one time, and avoid doing any offers in public places such as internet cafes because the offers freebiejeebies link to dont like getting several signups from the same IP adress."

Or something like that. Also Dont Go Capital On All The Words Like I Did Now, It's Ugly . Punctuations(!.,) between sentences also needed.



You have to do this

And as most people type wrong, it's THAN, not then for sentences like "do not sign up more than" and "then" for sentences like "blabla then you go and do a survey"...

Gotta go to the train station to pick up my sister now so cant do more.

thanks for that im correncted the errors thanks to your help