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20-08-09, 05:30 PM
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   | Would love you to have a check through mine please  In the sig
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21-08-09, 05:43 PM
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| Not spotted anything at all that needs changing, looks really professional, one of the best I've seen
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21-08-09, 06:01 PM
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21-08-09, 06:48 PM
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| It was, looks really good
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21-08-09, 07:01 PM
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| Could you check over TotallyFreebies :: Free iPhone 3GS if you have a chance? Thanks
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22-08-09, 11:24 AM
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Would change "I am an individual such as yourself. YOU can sign up today for a free gift! Anything from a brand spanking new Apple iPhone 3GS to Amazon Vouchers!" to "I am an individual like yourself yourself....." "It's a simple and legal process, and is open to these countries. Simply Sign Up, Complete an offer, then Refer Friends." I'd remove the bit about it being legal, even though it is sometimes when I see someone telling me it is, makes me think its not because they're emphasising it if that makes sense. I'd also make the word countries bold so you know to click on it for a list "Here at TotallyFreebies, we are linked with FreebieJeebies, one of the only worldwide Freebie Networks! We singled out FreebieJeebies so you could have the best experience ever." I wouldn't say you're linked with freebiejeebies as it makes it seem affiliated or something with it which technically you're not. I'd just say you recommendedfreebiejeebies, one of the only worldwide freebie networks Although I would bold the headings choice, how and proof to make them more noticeable if possible. Looks good though
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03-09-09, 09:13 PM
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Spot any obvious errors in this document? How to get free stuff online 
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05-09-09, 08:31 PM
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| No worries and sorry it's been a few days, forgot about this! I'd have a more user friendly front cover AND contents Page 3 "Click on any of the images and you will be taken to an approved and trusted giveaway site where you can get your free gift as my personal referral. · External links are highlighted throughout in blue. Click to access those." The point above says all external links are highlighted in blue, but the words "click on any of the images" in the point above that ARE in blue but not clickable, just might confuse some people If it's possible to, I'd make the images on page 3 so they don't have the ref link appearing when you hover over them, if it were me I'd prefer people to read the whole guide before seeing any ref links that might put them off Page 5 "The phenomenon of referral marketing has recently swept the U.S. by storm, through what is essentially an advertising" - stops mid-sentence, and I'd also refer to the UK just to emphasise the point again that it's not just US Page 7 Not done any offers for a while so not sure, but can you still do easy cinema? The coral image is out of date for the season as well Page 8 I'd remove the full email addresses from the image Page 10 and page 11 The eXceem link goes to the I got my free item thread, might be better to go to the forum home page, but then explain how they get trading access Page 12 "Q. How can I contact you? A. Drop me an e-mai l and I will get back to you within 24 hours. I am equally happy to speak with you via MSN or over the phone; Hope this helps
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06-09-09, 03:27 PM
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06-09-09, 03:49 PM
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| Thanks Emma. In the Word version you get a nice little description when you hover over the images. Unfortunately, when you convert to PDF, all it displays is the ref link. I guess I could just include the Word version but not sure if people might be more reluctant to download that? Thanks for other pointers, will have a look at those. Furb Quote:
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06-09-09, 06:48 PM
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| Emma, could You check DSiFree4You - Your guide to Free Nintendo DSi!, please? After you check TheUserName's website  Thanks
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14-09-09, 06:15 PM
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I'd have 1. Sign up here 2. Complete an offer. 3. Refer friends to do the same. 4. Claim your free gift! either as buttons, bold, or different size and colour to make them stand out I'd also make a separate offers page where you explain fully what offers are, types available, how much they cost etc and get rid of the two on the home page and do the same for the gifts What to do page I'd make the steps bigger and explain in more details and as above for the offers and gifts bit Liking the proof page, but I'd also make the text bigger on the how it works page. Grammar, spelling etc all seem to be fine, and sorry for the delay
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14-09-09, 06:20 PM
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I've checked and have to say there's nothing I've stopped that needs changing. It explains everything clearly, no spelling or grammar errors, and looks really good
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22-09-09, 07:06 PM
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| Thanks Emma.  (Even if it is a late thanks.  ) |
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22-09-09, 07:19 PM
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| Any chance you could give my new website http://www.FreebieShack.co.uk a quick once over? Much appreciated 
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25-09-09, 09:59 AM
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I'd remove the summer's end blog post- not really relevant It's a really good site generally, the only thing I would suggest is making the pages less text heavy, as you find yourself skim reading it rather than reading it properly, so someone knowing nothing about it could miss out vital steps
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26-02-10, 01:20 AM
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| Hello Emma. I was wondering if you could give me some feedback on Webs - Free website, free hosting, free webpage - Make a web site with photo albums, blogs, videos, forums and more! Whn you get the chance. Thanks |
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04-03-10, 08:27 PM
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| Will check for you over the weekend
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07-03-10, 05:28 PM
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| Sorry for the delay! Would remove the advertising bar from the top if you can Would make ipads for free in the middle of the home page a different colour so it stands out more and change to a more modern font Would make the home page title block small so you can see the tool bar below On the 'so how do I start page' Receive you're prize,free of P&P charges! you're needs to be your I'd try get rid of the borderround the iPad on the spread the word page On the home page or the so how do I start page, I'd have more info on the ipad and more details on how ther whole thing works
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11-03-10, 08:26 PM
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| this is a great service your offering and id love to get in on it, so is there any chance you can check out my site? many thanks. |
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