Turning Red To Green

Georgechar · 20-11-10, 07:30 PM

I have 17 reds and want to earn some greens so i created a template. I think it's kind of aggressive what do you think? Here it goes:

Dear sir/madam, if you want a free iPhone 4 or anything else, then, complete an offer in FreebieJeebies and refer your friends.Don’t want to complete the paid offer? Visit our website to find free offers or how to skip completing your offer: For more info visit our website at: Free Gadgets and Electronics!

Your Sincerely, George Charalambous

Georgechar · 20-11-10, 07:44 PM

OK i think it's finished! Feel free to use! What do you think?

Dear sir/madam, if you want a free iPhone 4 or anything else, then, complete an offer in FreebieJeebies and refer your friends.Don’t want to complete the paid offer? Visit our website to find free offers or how to skip completing your offer. For more information visit our website at: Free Gadgets and Electronics!

iPhone 4 Specs:

-Retina Display with LED Backlight
-Facetime
-iOS 4 , The most advanced mobile OS
-Apple A4 1.0 Ghz
-Gyroscope & Accelerometer
-Available at 16/32 GB
-Thinnest Smartphone on the Planet
-Technology that is decades infront.
-5 MPX Camera with LED Flash & HD Video Recording

With so much power in your hands, wouldn’t you do anything for an iPhone 4?
Imagine your life with the iPhone.Don’t miss your chance for getting your own never locked sim free iPhone 4.

Free iPhone 4 Available at 16/32GB Worldwide free delivery. With so much power at your fingertips, who would resist?

Your Sincerely, George Charalambous

Visit our website at Free Gadgets and Electronics!

iPhone4Matt · 20-11-10, 07:46 PM

Way too aggressive people will react badly, e.g think your a con artist demanding money from them.

Georgechar · 20-11-10, 07:49 PM

what about the newer one?

DPKThomas · 20-11-10, 08:06 PM

I agree with iPhone4Matt... its way too aggressive. Perhaps try a lighter approach. They might feel like their getting 'pushed' into completing an offer.

Harvez · 20-11-10, 08:12 PM

you need to write the email as though you were on the receiving end, if you read it and think pfft then most people will think the same.

sam01794 · 20-11-10, 08:18 PM

I think that it's better if they know you're just like them. In brief, what I write is:

Hi man
I saw that you signed up under my referral link for freebiejeebies. If you need any help getting your free gadget then I'm your man

. First, do you have any questions?

Sam Lochman

It's obviously far from the best but it's the right concept.

Georgechar · 21-11-10, 04:17 AM

Nice
So be cool. I will write a friendly letter instead of this thing lol.Thanks!

Kfchris1 · 21-11-10, 09:38 AM

hi there gorge!! an exceem member (sorry try to find oringal post but couldnt find it) posted a really good one a little while ago!! and mario said if you put a girls name at the bottom people will react a bit better to it!! this is what i send:

Hi There, Iv seen you have recently signed up for freebiejeebies!!

I'm guessing you did so because you wanted the latest apple product or free gift but didn't want to pay full price??

I'm just emailing you to let you know that in order to qualify for any of the gifts you need to complete one of the offers in the "offers" section, my personal choice is either the intuit offer or the Love film offer. The love film offer is not free any more but still very cheap (and you get to see a couple of films you want out of it). The intuit offer is FREE and all you have to do to quilify is sign up for a FREE 30day trail and create a website (which is very easy). You could even create a website to advertise your link for the free gift you want. Then you may even end up with more free gifts than one!!

Worldwinner offer at only $5 - £3 and you get a $15 bonus aswell!! So your get more money back than you put in....

Once you have done an offer all you need to do is get some friends to do the same - which should be easy as the free iPhone stands out as its a must have, but otherwise very expensive, gadget!!

If you need any help with anything just let me know and if you feel you need inspiration I recommend looking at the "I got my free item" thread on Exceem (I Got My Free Item! - eXceem). If you scroll down you should see that Real Incentives have already started giving out free iPhones to people who have qualified!

Anyway, thanks again for signing up

Stacey Jayne

hope this helps

jakcool6 · 21-11-10, 09:58 AM

Thats a perfect email, you would of convinced me

Harvez · 21-11-10, 10:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kfchris1

hi there gorge!! an exceem member (sorry try to find oringal post but couldnt find it) posted a really good one a little while ago!! and mario said if you put a girls name at the bottom people will react a bit better to it!! this is what i send:

Hi There, Iv seen you have recently signed up for freebiejeebies!!

I'm guessing you did so because you wanted the latest apple product or free gift but didn't want to pay full price??

I'm just emailing you to let you know that in order to qualify for any of the gifts you need to complete one of the offers in the "offers" section, my personal choice is either the intuit offer or the Love film offer. The love film offer is not free any more but still very cheap (and you get to see a couple of films you want out of it). The intuit offer is FREE and all you have to do to quilify is sign up for a FREE 30day trail and create a website (which is very easy). You could even create a website to advertise your link for the free gift you want. Then you may even end up with more free gifts than one!!

Worldwinner offer at only $5 - £3 and you get a $15 bonus aswell!! So your get more money back than you put in....

Once you have done an offer all you need to do is get some friends to do the same - which should be easy as the free iPhone stands out as its a must have, but otherwise very expensive, gadget!!

If you need any help with anything just let me know and if you feel you need inspiration I recommend looking at the "I got my free item" thread on Exceem (I Got My Free Item! - eXceem). If you scroll down you should see that Real Incentives have already started giving out free iPhones to people who have qualified!

Anyway, thanks again for signing up

Stacey Jayne

hope this helps

was going well until then.

Kfchris1 · 21-11-10, 10:17 AM

thanx for pointing that out!! just change that lol and change it around so it suites your website!! mine have links and contact details aswell

suparuss · 22-11-10, 09:28 AM

That's basically the same text as my email...in fact the opening paragraphs are EXACTLY the same

20-11-10, 07:30 PM	#1
Georgechar iPod Nano 4GB Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 292	Turning Red To Green I have 17 reds and want to earn some greens so i created a template. I think it's kind of aggressive what do you think? Here it goes: Dear sir/madam, if you want a free iPhone 4 or anything else, then, complete an offer in FreebieJeebies and refer your friends.Don’t want to complete the paid offer? Visit our website to find free offers or how to skip completing your offer: For more info visit our website at: Free Gadgets and Electronics! Your Sincerely, George Charalambous

20-11-10, 07:44 PM	#2
Georgechar iPod Nano 4GB Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 292	OK i think it's finished! Feel free to use! What do you think? Dear sir/madam, if you want a free iPhone 4 or anything else, then, complete an offer in FreebieJeebies and refer your friends.Don’t want to complete the paid offer? Visit our website to find free offers or how to skip completing your offer. For more information visit our website at: Free Gadgets and Electronics! iPhone 4 Specs: -Retina Display with LED Backlight -Facetime -iOS 4 , The most advanced mobile OS -Apple A4 1.0 Ghz -Gyroscope & Accelerometer -Available at 16/32 GB -Thinnest Smartphone on the Planet -Technology that is decades infront. -5 MPX Camera with LED Flash & HD Video Recording With so much power in your hands, wouldn’t you do anything for an iPhone 4? Imagine your life with the iPhone.Don’t miss your chance for getting your own never locked sim free iPhone 4. Free iPhone 4 Available at 16/32GB Worldwide free delivery. With so much power at your fingertips, who would resist? Your Sincerely, George Charalambous Visit our website at Free Gadgets and Electronics! Last edited by Georgechar; 20-11-10 at 07:47 PM.. Reason: Letters too big:p

20-11-10, 08:12 PM	#6
Harvez Mini Mac Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: l33dz Posts: 9,490	you need to write the email as though you were on the receiving end, if you read it and think pfft then most people will think the same. __________________ Freebiejeebies \| Free iphone \| Free Blackberry \| Free Wii U \| Free laptop Someone once said "Life is what you make it", I disagree sometimes life makes you into what you are.

21-11-10, 09:38 AM	#9
Kfchris1 iPod 30gb Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: In a Box In The Desert Posts: 1,480	hi there gorge!! an exceem member (sorry try to find oringal post but couldnt find it) posted a really good one a little while ago!! and mario said if you put a girls name at the bottom people will react a bit better to it!! this is what i send: Hi There, Iv seen you have recently signed up for freebiejeebies!! I'm guessing you did so because you wanted the latest apple product or free gift but didn't want to pay full price?? I'm just emailing you to let you know that in order to qualify for any of the gifts you need to complete one of the offers in the "offers" section, my personal choice is either the intuit offer or the Love film offer. The love film offer is not free any more but still very cheap (and you get to see a couple of films you want out of it). The intuit offer is FREE and all you have to do to quilify is sign up for a FREE 30day trail and create a website (which is very easy). You could even create a website to advertise your link for the free gift you want. Then you may even end up with more free gifts than one!! Worldwinner offer at only $5 - £3 and you get a $15 bonus aswell!! So your get more money back than you put in.... Once you have done an offer all you need to do is get some friends to do the same - which should be easy as the free iPhone stands out as its a must have, but otherwise very expensive, gadget!! If you need any help with anything just let me know and if you feel you need inspiration I recommend looking at the "I got my free item" thread on Exceem (I Got My Free Item! - eXceem). If you scroll down you should see that Real Incentives have already started giving out free iPhones to people who have qualified! Anyway, thanks again for signing up Stacey Jayne hope this helps __________________ Dont Tell Me "Sky's The Limit" When There Are Footprints On The Moon!! Get TWO Greens On The Gadets Kudos Conga Now!! Free Gadgets \| Free iPod Touch

21-11-10, 10:17 AM	#12
Kfchris1 iPod 30gb Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: In a Box In The Desert Posts: 1,480	thanx for pointing that out!! just change that lol and change it around so it suites your website!! mine have links and contact details aswell __________________ Dont Tell Me "Sky's The Limit" When There Are Footprints On The Moon!! Get TWO Greens On The Gadets Kudos Conga Now!! Free Gadgets \| Free iPod Touch

20-11-10, 07:46 PM	#3
iPhone4Matt iPod 20gb Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 887	Way too aggressive people will react badly, e.g think your a con artist demanding money from them.

20-11-10, 07:49 PM	#4
Georgechar iPod Nano 4GB Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 292	what about the newer one?

20-11-10, 08:06 PM	#5
DPKThomas iPod Nano 1GB Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Swansea Posts: 89	I agree with iPhone4Matt... its way too aggressive. Perhaps try a lighter approach. They might feel like their getting 'pushed' into completing an offer.

20-11-10, 08:18 PM	#7
sam01794 iPod Nano 4GB Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 299	I think that it's better if they know you're just like them. In brief, what I write is: Hi man I saw that you signed up under my referral link for freebiejeebies. If you need any help getting your free gadget then I'm your man . First, do you have any questions? Sam Lochman It's obviously far from the best but it's the right concept.

21-11-10, 04:17 AM	#8
Georgechar iPod Nano 4GB Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 292	Nice So be cool. I will write a friendly letter instead of this thing lol.Thanks!

21-11-10, 09:58 AM	#10
jakcool6 iPod Nano 4GB Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 230	Thats a perfect email, you would of convinced me

22-11-10, 09:28 AM	#13
suparuss iPod 20gb Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 503	That's basically the same text as my email...in fact the opening paragraphs are EXACTLY the same