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Old 31-07-10, 07:14 PM   #1
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Template Email - Feedback please :)


Hi everyone,

I made a template email to try and convert reds into greens, I've created a new email called sexxy_sally@blalbah... to try and catch people's attention.

Here's the actual email though, bare in mind I don't a website to refer to.

Hi,

Thanks for signing up on FreebieJeebies using my link.

The easiest offer to complete is the LoveFilm offer, it is 100% free.

All you have to do is sign up for the 2 week free trial, take out 1 film and then you just send the film back using the pre-paid envelope provided by LoveFilm.

This doesn't cost a penny, you get to complete your offer and get to watch a free film!

Once you've done that, you're on the road to getting your free gift, and then you just need the required amount of people to do the same simple process.

If you have any questions then don't hesitate to ask me, I'm here to help.

Thanks,
Sally

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Old 31-07-10, 07:49 PM   #2
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If I got an email and it was from sexy Sally I would bin it straight away. However if it came from Sally smith then I would probably open it. There are too many scam emails that go around from people calling themselves sexy Sara, sexy Sally or hot Jane for it to be attention catching. It will more likely deter people and make it look more like a scam.

The email itself is ok.
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Old 31-07-10, 07:54 PM   #3
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Fair enough, I'll change it to Sally Horn? Something that's sexual implicit but not blunt.
 
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Old 31-07-10, 08:29 PM   #4
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I still believe getting a random email that implies something sexual will go straight to the bin. The spam filter may even pick it up even before if reaches your ref.
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Old 31-07-10, 08:31 PM   #5
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I still believe getting a random email that implies something sexual will go straight to the bin. The spam filter may even pick it up even before if reaches your ref.
Yeah I have to agree, I think a simple girls name would be sufficient

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Old 31-07-10, 08:50 PM   #6
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Haha ok, sorry if it seems weird, just people don't say "sex sells" for no reason, it's unbelievably true!
 
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I would offer them some dosh as well as a extra incentive, say £6?

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