My Website Please tell me what you think

elliotknell · 10-10-09, 04:40 PM

I think that he meant that It doesn't look so good if you put it with XX. (just an opinion)

SometingStu · 10-10-09, 05:10 PM

I can understand that, but there's nothing else I can put unless I get an exact figure.

moviedrome · 10-10-09, 05:12 PM

You can't use an exact figure because it varies on the offer

SometingStu · 10-10-09, 05:22 PM

Thanks for that (for some odd reason it always seams like the mods such as moviedrome wouldn't bother leaving posts on a thread like this, so thanks for that.)

Also, a digg button has been added, could you digg it so that I can get some targetted traffic as well as mabye backlinks?

elliotknell · 10-10-09, 05:36 PM

If you want some easy backlinks then put you're site's link in your signature with whatever words you are targeting.

iheartmuzic · 10-10-09, 06:11 PM

Its coming along great

SometingStu · 10-10-09, 06:24 PM

Thanks, does the link in my sig, work, I need to post this to check.

EDIT: No, can somebody teach me how to make my sig clickable.

LilDeamon · 10-10-09, 11:44 PM

To make it clickable use this code

[--URL="your website"][img]link to your image[/img][/URL--]

remove the dashes

SometingStu · 11-10-09, 08:19 AM

Thanks mate,I'll be on that one now... Ok should work now.

Ok, done, but I need to resize the sig...

sameer004 · 11-10-09, 11:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by elliotknell

Like I said, a professional way of wording things is key to making your site believable.

hi Elliot
would you have a look at my website see if there's more work to be done
is it professional enough ?
cheers

SometingStu · 11-10-09, 11:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer004

hi Elliot
would you have a look at my website see if there's more work to be done
is it professional enough ?
cheers

Couldn't that have been done through PM rather than having to spam this thread, but Elliot, could you elaborate on my use of unproffessional language please.

Anyway, a few little updates, there is now a hit counter at the bottom, and in the address bar (For eg right now mine says eXceem-Reply to Topic-Mozilla Firefox) It now read EasyiPod-Free iPod's PS3's and more!

Webber · 11-10-09, 12:58 PM

Looks nice

SometingStu · 11-10-09, 01:04 PM

Yes, so if I'm right, every post from now on, when a spider comes along it should read my sig and visit my site, right?

icyoli · 11-10-09, 01:26 PM

Nice, clean site but be careful about the guide on freebiejeebies T&c's it says you cand guide users

SometingStu · 11-10-09, 01:36 PM

All it does is show how to sign up, there shouldn't be anything wrong with that, and the rest of the guides will just be green guides or terminologies.

elliotknell · 11-10-09, 11:09 PM

I don't think showing how to sign up should be a problem, as long as you don't go any further. As to the professional use of language, here's an example from you main page:

Your paragraph:

"EasyiPod endures to get ordinary people like me and you some excellent freebies like PS3's and iPods. Skeptical? I can understand that, it's perfectly normal for somebody to be skeptical about getting a £180 piece of kit for free. But this is how it works.

When you sign up you must do an offer, this gives the site £XX from the advertisers. Then, to get your freebies you must get people to sign up under your name. They must do an offer as well, creating £XX for the advertisers, then say you want an iPod Classic (9 people under your name/Referrals) the site will out £180 from their money to buy the iPod, then keep the profit."

I would not say endures, It means survives or stays alive, It doesn't make much sense. Try exists. Also, try not to use a major word such as skeptical more than once in a sentence. Find a synonym. Don't say "piece of kit", it is pretty much slang. As someone else mentioned, i would also change the XX. Just find a different way to put it. Here, I'll rewrite it in what I would put:

"EasyiPod [b]exists[b] to get ordinary people like you and me excellent (leave out the some) freebies like PS3's and iPods. Skeptical? I can understand that, it's perfectly normal for somebody to be unsure about the reality of getting a £180 music player for free. Here's how it's possible:

When you sign up you must do an offer, this gives the site a comission from the advertiser. Then, to get your freebies you must get people to sign up under your unique referral link. They must do an offer as well, earning more money for the advertisers. If you want an iPod Classic, which requires 9 referrals, the freebie site will take £180 from their earnings to buy the iPod, then keep the profit."

Hope this helped, just pretend that you're writing a resumé and it must be perfect. I know it's hard, but it can make all the diferrece.

-Elliot

nelumeh · 13-10-09, 09:02 PM

I have i my new website, please tell me what you think Gadgets For Nothing - Start

cono1717 · 14-10-09, 02:03 PM

You can always contact FJ and ask them if a specific page violates their terms. Make sure you point them to the right page they are too busy to be poking around the whole site

SometingStu · 16-10-09, 05:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by elliotknell

I don't think showing how to sign up should be a problem, as long as you don't go any further. As to the professional use of language, here's an example from you main page...

Hope this helped, just pretend that you're writing a resumé and it must be perfect. I know it's hard, but it can make all the diferrece.

-Elliot

Thanks Elliot, I'll get right onto editing that

Quote:

Originally Posted by nelumeh

I have i my new website, please tell me what you think Gadgets For Nothing - Start

Start your ow thread and don't spam other peoples

Quote:

Originally Posted by cono1717

You can always contact FJ and ask them if a specific page violates their terms. Make sure you point them to the right page they are too busy to be poking around the whole site

But I want more views!!!

BillinghamJ · 21-10-09, 09:11 PM

It's nice but it needs touching up. Like on the 'Guides' page it says 'Title.'
In my opinion, that level of attention to detail is what makes the difference.

10-10-09, 05:12 PM	#23
moviedrome FJ Network Owner Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 6,802	You can't use an exact figure because it varies on the offer __________________ freebiejeebies Consoles \| Apple \| HDTV \| PS3 \| Mobiles \| Sports \| Gadgets \| Points \| Gifts \| Select Supported Network of the Year 2008 & 2009 & 2010 & 2011 Network Staff Member of the Year 2009 & 2011 (joint) Supported Network of the Year (Design) 2008 New and Unproven Network of the Year 2007

10-10-09, 06:24 PM	#27
SometingStu iPod 30gb Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 1,488	Thanks, does the link in my sig, work, I need to post this to check. EDIT: No, can somebody teach me how to make my sig clickable. Last edited by SometingStu; 10-10-09 at 06:25 PM..

10-10-09, 11:44 PM	#28
LilDeamon iPod Shuffle Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Manchester Posts: 4	To make it clickable use this code [--URL="your website"][img]link to your image[/img][/URL--] remove the dashes Last edited by LilDeamon; 10-10-09 at 11:47 PM..

11-10-09, 08:19 AM	#29
SometingStu iPod 30gb Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 1,488	Thanks mate,I'll be on that one now... Ok should work now. Ok, done, but I need to resize the sig... Last edited by SometingStu; 11-10-09 at 08:21 AM..

14-10-09, 02:03 PM	#38
cono1717 iPod 30gb Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Widnes Posts: 1,090	You can always contact FJ and ask them if a specific page violates their terms. Make sure you point them to the right page they are too busy to be poking around the whole site __________________ Totally Free iPad \| McFlurry Ice Cream Van Everything I say reflects my own opinions and not that of any company.

10-10-09, 04:40 PM	#21
elliotknell iPod 20gb Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: U.S. Posts: 673	I think that he meant that It doesn't look so good if you put it with XX. (just an opinion)

10-10-09, 05:10 PM	#22
SometingStu iPod 30gb Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 1,488	I can understand that, but there's nothing else I can put unless I get an exact figure.

10-10-09, 05:22 PM	#24
SometingStu iPod 30gb Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 1,488	Thanks for that (for some odd reason it always seams like the mods such as moviedrome wouldn't bother leaving posts on a thread like this, so thanks for that.) Also, a digg button has been added, could you digg it so that I can get some targetted traffic as well as mabye backlinks?

10-10-09, 05:36 PM	#25
elliotknell iPod 20gb Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: U.S. Posts: 673	If you want some easy backlinks then put you're site's link in your signature with whatever words you are targeting.

10-10-09, 06:11 PM	#26
iheartmuzic iPod Shuffle Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: London. You ? Posts: 4	Its coming along great

11-10-09, 12:58 PM	#32
Webber iPod Nano 4GB Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 203	Looks nice

11-10-09, 01:04 PM	#33
SometingStu iPod 30gb Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 1,488	Yes, so if I'm right, every post from now on, when a spider comes along it should read my sig and visit my site, right?

11-10-09, 01:26 PM	#34
icyoli iPod 20gb Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 846	Nice, clean site but be careful about the guide on freebiejeebies T&c's it says you cand guide users

11-10-09, 01:36 PM	#35
SometingStu iPod 30gb Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 1,488	All it does is show how to sign up, there shouldn't be anything wrong with that, and the rest of the guides will just be green guides or terminologies.

11-10-09, 11:09 PM	#36
elliotknell iPod 20gb Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: U.S. Posts: 673	I don't think showing how to sign up should be a problem, as long as you don't go any further. As to the professional use of language, here's an example from you main page: Your paragraph: "EasyiPod endures to get ordinary people like me and you some excellent freebies like PS3's and iPods. Skeptical? I can understand that, it's perfectly normal for somebody to be skeptical about getting a £180 piece of kit for free. But this is how it works. When you sign up you must do an offer, this gives the site £XX from the advertisers. Then, to get your freebies you must get people to sign up under your name. They must do an offer as well, creating £XX for the advertisers, then say you want an iPod Classic (9 people under your name/Referrals) the site will out £180 from their money to buy the iPod, then keep the profit." I would not say endures, It means survives or stays alive, It doesn't make much sense. Try exists. Also, try not to use a major word such as skeptical more than once in a sentence. Find a synonym. Don't say "piece of kit", it is pretty much slang. As someone else mentioned, i would also change the XX. Just find a different way to put it. Here, I'll rewrite it in what I would put: "EasyiPod [b]exists[b] to get ordinary people like you and me excellent (leave out the some) freebies like PS3's and iPods. Skeptical? I can understand that, it's perfectly normal for somebody to be unsure about the reality of getting a £180 music player for free. Here's how it's possible: When you sign up you must do an offer, this gives the site a comission from the advertiser. Then, to get your freebies you must get people to sign up under your unique referral link. They must do an offer as well, earning more money for the advertisers. If you want an iPod Classic, which requires 9 referrals, the freebie site will take £180 from their earnings to buy the iPod, then keep the profit." Hope this helped, just pretend that you're writing a resumé and it must be perfect. I know it's hard, but it can make all the diferrece. -Elliot

13-10-09, 09:02 PM	#37
nelumeh iPod Shuffle Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 3	I have i my new website, please tell me what you think Gadgets For Nothing - Start

21-10-09, 09:11 PM	#40
BillinghamJ BANNED Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Warrington, UK Posts: 9	It's nice but it needs touching up. Like on the 'Guides' page it says 'Title.' In my opinion, that level of attention to detail is what makes the difference.