Made a YouTube movie to get greens, is it good ?

tibhel · 21-09-09, 02:42 PM

What do you guys think about my movie that I made in about 3 hours.

YouTube - How To GET A Completely FREE iPhone 3Gs, with Proofs

Please give me feedback and tell me if I have to change anything, like in the description!

Thanks in advance!

benjie987 · 21-09-09, 02:54 PM

i liked the way u added exceem in the vid
but dont coment on ur own video sayin u recieved the iphone, lol its kinda sad to b honest

Drathro · 21-09-09, 02:55 PM

It's good, though some of the captions go past too quickly and there are a lot of spelling errors.

tibhel · 21-09-09, 02:58 PM

Yea, I know maybe the comment was bad, but it wasn't exactly the same name

lol

What did I spell wrong ?
(Live in Sweden, 15 years old)

Drathro · 21-09-09, 03:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tibhel

What did I spell wrong ?

"Whan't" should be Want

"whatch in HQ" should be watch

"Corse" should be course

"adress" should be address

"show's up" should be shows up

"freinds" should be friends

i think that was them all, my memory isn't what it was.

MegamanEXE · 21-09-09, 03:50 PM

Not bad at all.

Cruelworld · 21-09-09, 04:44 PM

I presume you still have the files that you can edit don't you ?
After you have addressed the spelling mistakes mentioned above then slow it all down a bit.
Well, a lot...

You have crammed all that into 1:24 when you have up to 10 minutes to play with.
What's the rush

Make it maybe a 2 minute film.

Other than that it's a pretty good video.

tibhel · 21-09-09, 05:29 PM

Yea, but it can't be too long then no one will be patient to see it, the only thing I want them to see is the ref. link., and it seems much easier when it's short to get an iPhone. And you can just pause it when watching the tutorial.

Then I don't know if I want to delete it then re-upload it, it's a little bit annoying.

But thanks anyway!

Maxx · 21-09-09, 05:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tibhel

Yea, but it can't be too long then no one will be patient to see it, the only thing I want them to see is the ref. link., and it seems much easier when it's short to get an iPhone. And you can just pause it when watching the tutorial.

Then I don't know if I want to delete it then re-upload it, it's a little bit annoying.

But thanks anyway!

If I were you, I'd make a website to promote, rather then just your referral link. In my experience people are more likely to just go to gifts.freebiejeebies.co.uk or whatever, rather then use your referral link.

If you link them directly from your website they're less likely to delete it.

Nice video though.

21-09-09, 02:42 PM	#1
tibhel iPod Shuffle Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 3	Made a YouTube movie to get greens, is it good ? What do you guys think about my movie that I made in about 3 hours. YouTube - How To GET A Completely FREE iPhone 3Gs, with Proofs Please give me feedback and tell me if I have to change anything, like in the description! Thanks in advance!

21-09-09, 03:50 PM	#6
MegamanEXE iPod 20gb Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Pakistan Posts: 841	Not bad at all. __________________ Free iPhone\|Scientia Web\|Free Gaming Consoles\|Free Gadgets\|

21-09-09, 02:54 PM	#2
benjie987 iPod Nano 2GB Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 160	i liked the way u added exceem in the vid but dont coment on ur own video sayin u recieved the iphone, lol its kinda sad to b honest

21-09-09, 02:55 PM	#3
Drathro iPod Nano 4GB Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 320	It's good, though some of the captions go past too quickly and there are a lot of spelling errors.

21-09-09, 02:58 PM	#4
tibhel iPod Shuffle Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 3	Yea, I know maybe the comment was bad, but it wasn't exactly the same name lol What did I spell wrong ? (Live in Sweden, 15 years old)

21-09-09, 04:44 PM	#7
Cruelworld Romper Stomper Join Date: May 2009 Location: Behind the fridge... Posts: 4,268	I presume you still have the files that you can edit don't you ? After you have addressed the spelling mistakes mentioned above then slow it all down a bit. Well, a lot... You have crammed all that into 1:24 when you have up to 10 minutes to play with. What's the rush Make it maybe a 2 minute film. Other than that it's a pretty good video.

21-09-09, 05:29 PM	#8
tibhel iPod Shuffle Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 3	Yea, but it can't be too long then no one will be patient to see it, the only thing I want them to see is the ref. link., and it seems much easier when it's short to get an iPhone. And you can just pause it when watching the tutorial. Then I don't know if I want to delete it then re-upload it, it's a little bit annoying. But thanks anyway!