is this site good

[riko45]

i made a site here nd is it good please have a look at it
tmart.webs.com

[wombleboy05]

Sorry to say this but the sites not that great. (only trying to help)

Here are a few tips to improve the site.

1) Use the right grammar and spelling.
2) Change the name of your site to something relevant
3) Don't say things like "belive me dont go away its working 100% real i am too going for a xbox 360" as it just makes people pull away.

4) Make your referral link clickable by adding "http://" to the start of the link.
5) Add some pictures like an 360 or PS3
6) Add more content. E.g "How it works", "Proof" etc
7) Change the logo. Someone will make you a free one if you ask nicely in the "graphics" section of the forum

8) Don't leave a blank space. Fill it up with something.

You should also build backlinks for your site. This will get your site indexed higher in google and get you some visitors. You can do this by adding your link to your signature or posting on blogs relevant to your site. There are many ways.

I'm no expert. Just my two cents.

[elliotknell]

Yeah, i second that. Personally, i think it is no good at all. It hardly makes sense. Not to be mean, but it really needs a lot of work just to be understandable. Also, the template is not relevant at all, and it needs more formating, images, links, etc. Good as a start i guess, but if you leave it as it is this site will problably never be a good source of greens. Just rework it, and keep it up, you'll get there eventually

[Jak3rz]

Sorry to say this but this site isnt verry good, Might aswell be a blog entry, Fonts too small, Image has no relavance at all, and basic stuff such as using a link tag

<a href="Insert web address here">The words you would like the reader to see</a>
Verry simple things can make a big differance

[Jak3rz]

Need any help Just Pm me, I have experiance with website design.

[riko45]

but i didnt get one item how do i add proof should i add a link to this site so they could understand

[riko45]

ive made a new website but i need to know how to put proof without me having got a thing yet

[elliotknell]

YOu can use other people's images as long as you ask permission from them, I don't have any personnally but feel free to ask around.

-Elliot

[riko45]

thanks for all your support i made a new site in weebly they said weebly is better then
webs in design so i said why dont i try it a bit and can you help me how to put pictures with a link in it sof they press a picture it sends them to the site
my new site is
winxbox360.weebly.com
tell me of its good ot not
i really would appericate it thanks

[Cruelworld]

Just going to say something and hope you don't think i'm just being plain nasty, i'm not.

Your immediate attention needs to be grammar and spelling.

If English is your second language then you need to pay much more attention to grammar and spelling. Try writing your passages in Word or some other text editor and using the spell checking function.
People will just leave your site immediately if they see it presented like that.

If English is your first language then please go back to school and listen this time.

[riko45]

thanks for your advice cruelworld

[the joker]

the webs.com bulder is very useful ... don't forget tp make the link clickable

[riko45]

thanks for the advice i did it in my new site

[Lexus11180]

Originally Posted by riko45

thanks for the advice i did it in my new site

New site? So there is an improvement on the one mentioned in the original post then? The one you've shown just looks like a 5 minute afterthought to get some referals. The whole thing just looks scammy in my opinion.

[Lexus11180]

Originally Posted by Lexus11180

New site? So there is an improvement on the one mentioned in the original post then? The one you've shown just looks like a 5 minute afterthought to get some referals. The whole thing just looks scammy in my opinion.

Just noticed you had linked it further up the page (PLEASE make an effort to type properly... seriously you obviously are not interested in wanting to communicate to people clearly). Your writing is just so terrible to look at that frankly I blanked all your posts on here and turns out I’m doing the same on your site. I'm sure I am not the only one who thinks this and really you're just wasting your time.

Seriously these sites are made to get you referrals for free items which would cost you a lot of money... the other way to get those is to make a huge effort in a job where you earn the money to buy these products. So for goodness sake actually take time and effort to make a site like this, it really will pay off and I know that as an un-doubtable FACT.

If you make a site that looks bad people will automatically relate that site to any of these freebie sites and just ignore them thinking they are scams. Again your new site looks scammy.

Actually take what I’ve said into account next time when making a new site (I do hope you're not planning to just leave that site as it is? ). Your new site is just as crappy as the first one.


Thanks.

[riko45]

thanks lexus for your advice i will try to wor hard to make it a good green source

[riko45]

i had much advice and support from the people here this site is the best i love this site it showed me the ways i will always come here i already edited my site and after i get my item i will get exceem extra to support this site

[elliotknell]

I'm glad you got what you were looking for!

-Elliot

[riko45]

no i meant when getting it only i only have 3 pending but thanks

[riko45]

i will always come to this site i am looking upto a xbox 360 elite but still no luck but i aint giving up this site gave me many things so after i get all referrals i will get extra only for supporting this site