Whats the best way to word my emails?

beanie1 · 15-02-09, 03:22 PM

I'm going to send an email to my contacts but I'm not sure what is the best way to word it so it sounds genuine. I want to advertise a free iPhone 3G. Any help would be greatly appreciated,

beanie1

digger600 · 15-02-09, 04:32 PM

http://www.exceem.co.uk/forums/how-g...te-emails.html

Crube · 16-02-09, 12:32 PM

My approach is to get my point across in as little amount of words possible, my E-Mails are around 2 paragraphs long. Also, think about what would persuade YOU to go back and consider completing the offer - try and step inside their shoes. Best of luck

beanie1 · 16-02-09, 01:05 PM

Thanks for the advice. Yeah I just cant really think about what to say to persuade them to sign up. Ill only get one shot at sending the email to all my contacts once its sent its sent so I want it to be perfect.

Jackh09 · 17-02-09, 08:08 PM

If I recieved an email the main thing I'd be wary of, is being scammed. So the main thing I try to explain in the few emails I've sent is this is genuine as simply as possible. But then again I only joined today and I've yet to refer anyone.

mcgrou · 17-02-09, 08:11 PM

I think the best possible thing to do is give a link to eXceem. Exceem is an endless source of proof and advice for any newbies to the freebie scene and when people see what others have been recieving, they will naturally get jealous and what to get some freebies themself!

digger600 · 17-02-09, 08:55 PM

lol and make yourself a girl if you aren't already

15-02-09, 03:22 PM	#1
beanie1 iPod Shuffle Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 2	Whats the best way to word my emails? I'm going to send an email to my contacts but I'm not sure what is the best way to word it so it sounds genuine. I want to advertise a free iPhone 3G. Any help would be greatly appreciated, beanie1

17-02-09, 08:11 PM	#6
mcgrou - - - - - - - Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: - Posts: 5,156	I think the best possible thing to do is give a link to eXceem. Exceem is an endless source of proof and advice for any newbies to the freebie scene and when people see what others have been recieving, they will naturally get jealous and what to get some freebies themself! __________________ Spoiler Warning: If you are reading this then this warning is for you. Every word you read of this useless fine print is another second off your life. Don't you have other things to do? Is your life so empty that you honestly can't think of a better way to spend these moments? Or are you so impressed with authority that you give respect and credence to all that claim it? Do you read everything you're supposed to read? Do you think every thing you're supposed to think? Buy what you're told to want? Get out of your apartment. Meet a member of the opposite sex. Stop the excessive shopping and masturbation. Quit your job. Start a fight. Prove you're alive. If you don't claim your humanity you will become a statistic. You have been warned - Tyler

15-02-09, 04:32 PM	#2
digger600 Mini Mac Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: My House Posts: 4,315	http://www.exceem.co.uk/forums/how-g...te-emails.html

16-02-09, 12:32 PM	#3
Crube iPod Nano 1GB Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 77	My approach is to get my point across in as little amount of words possible, my E-Mails are around 2 paragraphs long. Also, think about what would persuade YOU to go back and consider completing the offer - try and step inside their shoes. Best of luck

16-02-09, 01:05 PM	#4
beanie1 iPod Shuffle Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 2	Thanks for the advice. Yeah I just cant really think about what to say to persuade them to sign up. Ill only get one shot at sending the email to all my contacts once its sent its sent so I want it to be perfect.

17-02-09, 08:08 PM	#5
Jackh09 iPod Shuffle Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 8	If I recieved an email the main thing I'd be wary of, is being scammed. So the main thing I try to explain in the few emails I've sent is this is genuine as simply as possible. But then again I only joined today and I've yet to refer anyone.

17-02-09, 08:55 PM	#7
digger600 Mini Mac Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: My House Posts: 4,315	lol and make yourself a girl if you aren't already