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This is a discussion on just need an opinion within the eXceem Graphics Team forums, part of the Websites category; I put together a quick flyer for a small home business... i would just want to see some outside opinions ...
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11-10-11, 06:02 AM
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| The Nice Guy  Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Brooklyn,NY
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 | just need an opinionI put together a quick flyer for a small home business... i would just want to see some outside opinions of what people think and if you have any ideas on what to add/edit. thanks in advance 
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11-10-11, 06:39 AM
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| Mini Mac  Join Date: Jun 2005
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| Looks really good, the only thing I'd remove in the text is the word design between beautiful and basket as you've got it later in the same sentence and maybe say any design or colour. I'd also have the price below the text as you'll notice it more. I was automatically drawn to the main text but missed the bit with the price in.
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11-10-11, 07:34 AM
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| The Nice Guy Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Brooklyn,NY
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